Limerick

from Mikes

There was a young man from New Delhi

who had a great big fat belly

 

over lapped again which one do you want to go from

 

"There was a young man from New Delhi

who had a great big fat belly"


His trousers were tight

 

and ever so bright

 

This is all getting very confusing. We triple posted on the Mike's Delhi one - I had put another line on the same post when I repeated his first line. Can I suggest we write our lines IN CAPITALS as I think some are getting lost and confused - well I am anyway - as there is a lot of stuff going on in the responses. Would that be easier ?? Oui Non

 

Topic: Limerick
Marley Farley

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Member # 533

posted 07-07-2007 19:22
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(and) Who'd only wear one old wellie

 

I used Marley's wellie bit to finish the Delhi one off, so now we can start again.

Shall I?

THERE WAS A YOUNG GAL FROM MADRID

 

I'll wait............double post

 

WHO SOLD ALL HER SHOES FOR A QUID

 

MY FEET WILL GET BAKED

 

AND HOW, SHE WAS RIGHT, AND THEY DID

[ 07. July 2007, 09:03 PM: Message edited by: Dorsetmike ]

 

- that isn't right Mike, try again please -


I think the next one in lower case Kryssy, uh? Alternate them.

 

Sorry I didn't take Marley's line as part of it, the "middle" lines should be the same length usually 5 or 6 syllables so I was following your line.